Narrative Critique
Name: TheSpyStore.com
URL: http://www.thespystore.com/
Why do you want to re-design this website?
This website is pretty awful. The logo at the head of the home page doesn’t even fit inside the box it has been placed within. The black background is overwhelming to me. The horizontal and vertical navigation is really hard to read with the bright blue underlined text. Once you actually find what it is that you are looking for each product has this really cheesy blinking “new” sign above the description. The product description is very hard to read and has these really ugly purple bullet points in them. The products also have photos that are very low quality. When you click on the index for a specific product you are searching for, the list is in all caps gold text inside white boxes with a black background. Its really hard to read. Itt is also extremely difficult to order a product from this site. There is absolutely zero design put into this site as well. This site doesn’t even really follow a grid.
Who is the target audience?
The target audience is any individual, buisness, and law enforcement who is interested in spy equipment. Their products include audio/video, PC, gps, cellphone, and counter surveillance. They even sell items that allow you to catch a wife, husband or partner who you suspect is cheating on you.
What did you learn from the competitive analysis and how did it impact your re-design?
The competitive analysis really opened my eyes as to how similar companies to The Spy Store designed their sites. It also showed how poorly laid out the site I chose was. By doing this analysis it gave me inspiration on how to layout a simple yet effective design for my new site SpyGear.com. It showed me who my competition was and how to be different from them.




